New Excerpt: Revised
“ Sadie why are you acting up? Why are you trembling?”, please let
me help you”!
The room got pitched dark and Sadie felt the room begin to spin rapidly.
“ Stay away from me Dante!, or I swear I will kill you”. “ You have
hurt me for the very last time!”
As she said this Dante tried to walk quietly towards her.
“ Please baby- Why don’t you let me call the doctor so he can help you?
After a brief silence- Sadie grabs a gun.
“ Sadie please put the gun down”!, he said urgently. “Please baby,
don’t do this” ! “ Give me the gun, okay, I promise you darlin, we can
get through this!”, he said in a stern tone.
“ No! Dante, don’t try to make me forget all you have done to me” !
As Sadie cried out, her thoughts began to run away with her. As she looked down,
at the 9 millimeter gun she had in her hand, her nose began to bleed. Then suddenly
her vision got very blurry. She could hear her daughter’s cry and all of a sudden the room
begins to move in different directions. She could barely hear Dante’s voice. It is slowly dimming away, and she can see his
brown eyes fading. All of a sudden she begins to stumble down and a gun
suddenly goes off...