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Writer: New Excerpt: Revised

Writer: New Excerpt: Revised: Prologue: “ Sadie why are you acting up? Why are you trembling?”, please let me help you”! The room got pitched dark and...
Sadie Carlyle awoke in a state of despair when she finally opened her eyes, she  noticed that  she was lying in what appeared to be a large hospital bed.   Then,   immediately, Sadie  began  screaming very loudly.  She was so out of control that a strong sedative was required to calm her  down.   Her long red hair looked so dry, as the sedative took immediate effect.  It was not too  long before her greenish eyes began to close again, her skin looked so pale as the nurse applied  a soft pillow under her neck.   This had been an intense few days for Sadie.   Her emotions    were running so high that you could see the puffiness in her swollen eyes from all the non-stop  crying.   It was so hard to believe that Sadie was once a very attractive green eyed  red head that captivated a room with her profound beauty.  After a few minutes the nurse noticed  that Sadie was bleeding from her nose.   As this was going on, the nurse quickly called the  doctor .   In the meantime Sadie still  asleep began  t…

Writer: New Excerpt: Revised

Writer: New Excerpt: Revised: Prologue: “ Sadie why are you acting up? Why are you trembling?”, please let me help you”! The room got pitched dark an...

New Excerpt: Revised

Prologue: 
“ Sadie why are you acting up?  Why are you trembling?”, please let  me help you”!  The room got pitched dark and Sadie felt the room begin to spin rapidly.   “ Stay away from me Dante!,  or I swear I will kill you”.   “ You have  hurt me for the very last time!”  As she said this Dante tried to walk quietly towards her.    “ Please baby- Why don’t you let me call the doctor so he can help you? After a brief silence- Sadie grabs a gun. “ Sadie  please put the gun down”!, he said urgently.   “Please baby,  don’t do this” !   “ Give me the gun, okay, I promise you darlin, we can  get through this!”, he said in a stern tone.  “ No! Dante, don’t try to make me forget all you have done to me” !      As Sadie cried out, her thoughts began to run away with her.     As she looked down,  at the 9 millimeter gun she had in her hand, her nose began to bleed.   Then suddenly  her vision got very blurry.   She could hear her daughter’s cry and all of a sudden the room  begins to move  in different dire…

sylstein's corner: excerpt to my novel..

sylstein's corner: excerpt to my novel..: Sadie seemed confused and disoriented- she had no idea where she was and what was happening to her.. " Dante are you here, she cried, Dant...

Writer: Prologue

Writer: Prologue: Prologue: “ Sadie why are you acting up? why are you trembling, please let me help you. The room got pitched dark and S...

Writer: “ I am trapped in this dark hole,  “ I am trying t...

Writer “ I am trapped in this dark hole, “ I am trying t...: “ I am trapped in this dark hole, “ I am trying to get out, but he does not allow me, "he is my enemy and I wish he was gone! “ Ok...
“ I am trapped in this dark hole,  “ I am trying to get out, but he does not allow me”, he is my enemy and I wish he was gone.  “ Okay Sadie now why did you write this on your journal today and whom is this about. “ This is about my husband Dante.   “ What do you mean Dante, and that he is your enemy?  said a puzzled Dr. Howard. “ Dante is the one who has been beating me all this time, as Sadie fought back tears her nose began to bleed. “  Why would Dante hurt you Sadie?, as dr. Howard waited for her to respond she noticed Sadie’s nose bleeding a bit stronger.  “  Sadie do you want me to call Dr. Brewster to schedule an appointment for your nose bleeds.   “ oh no Dr. Howard that will not be necessary.....   I have had nose bleeds since I was a child. Oh I was not aware of that..  She said but then continued “ so these nose bleeds are normal to you. “ Yes Doctor , and right now your concern should be on Dante my husband who is out to  kill me, because he wants custody of our daughter Keyla. “ Ke…

Prologue

Prologue:  “ Sadie why are you acting up?  why are you trembling, please let me  help you.     The room got pitched dark and Sadie felt the room begin to spin rapidly.   “ Stay away from me Dante, “ “ or I swear I will kill you”.   “ You have  hurt me for the very last time.”  As she said this Dante tried to walk quietly towards her.    “ Please baby- Why don’t you let me call the doctor so he can help you? After a brief silence- Sadie grabs a gun.    “ Sadie  please put the gun down, he said urgently.   Please baby,  don’t do this.    “ Give me the gun, okay, I promise you darlin, we can  get through this”, he said in a stern tone.  “ No Dante, don’t try to make me forget all you have done to me.       As Sadie cried out, her thoughts began to run away with her.     As she looked down,  at the 9 millimeter gun she had in her hand, her nose began to bleed.   Then suddenly  her vision got very blurry.   She could hear her babie’s cry and all of a sudden the room  begins to move  in different direction…