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Sadie Carlyle awoke in a state of despair when she finally opened her eyes, and noticed that  she was lying in what appeared to be a large hospital bed.   Then,  she  immediately began  screaming very loudly.  She was so out of control that a strong sedative was required to calm her  down.   Her long red hair looked so dry, as the sedative took immediate effect.  It was not too  long before her greenish eyes began to close again, her skin looked so pale as the nurse applied  a soft pillow under her neck.   This had been an intense few days for Sadie.   Her emotions    were running so high that you could see the puffiness in her swollen eyes from all the non-stop  crying.   It was so hard to believe that Sadie was once a very attractive green eyed  red head that captivated a room with her profound beauty.  After a few minutes the nurse noticed  that Sadie was bleeding from her nose.   As this was going on, the nurse quickly called the  doctor .   In the meantime Sadie still  asleep began  to let…

Writer: New Excerpt for my novel..

Writer: New Excerpt for my novel..: The room was pitched dark, and you could hear the phone ringing very loudly. However, there was no answer that night of May 27, 200...

Writer: Writer: Excerpt- for my book..

Writer: Writer: Excerpt- for my book..: Writer: Excerpt- for my book.. : Sadie Carlyle awoke in a state of despair when she finally opened her eyes, and noticed that she was l...

New Excerpt for my novel..

The room was pitched dark, and you could hear the phone ringing very loudly.    However, there was no answer that night of May 27, 2009 at the Carlyle residence.     This is when the neighbor retired Nurse  Agatha Lane called the authorities.   Ms. Lane  lived alone and never married and took a liking to the Carlyle’s.  Sadie and Ms. Lane   became instant friends and she also extended her help to them when they needed care  for their daughter.  In her frantic call she just said she had heard a gunshot and believed  some intruders had broken into the home.  This is when the authorities were alerted and  they went straight to the scene of the crime.  The large Mansion  was located in North  Raleigh.  This was a very private and secluded area.  Both  Dante and Sadie  were part  of a very wealthy class with both of them belonging to families that had inherited  millions.  Dante’s father Douglas was a very wealthy financial investor in the North  Carolina area , and his mother Dorotea a very well kno…

Writer: Excerpt- for my book..

Writer: Excerpt- for my book..: Sadie Carlyle awoke in a state of despair when she finally opened her eyes, and noticed that she was lying in what appeared to be a l...

Excerpt- for my book..

Sadie Carlyle awoke in a state of despair when she finally opened her eyes, and noticed that  she was lying in what appeared to be a large hospital bed.   Then,  she  immediately began  screaming very loudly.  She was so out of control that a strong sedative was required to calm her  down.   Her long red hair looked so dry, as the sedative took immediate effect.  It was not too  long before her greenish eyes began to close again, her skin looked so pale as the nurse applied  a soft pillow under her neck.   This had been an intense few days for Sadie.   Her emotions    were running so high that you could see the puffiness in her swollen eyes from all the non-stop  crying.   It was so hard to believe that Sadie was once a very attractive green eyed  red head that captivated a room with her profound beauty.  After a few minutes the nurse noticed  that Sadie was bleeding from her nose.   As this was going on, the nurse quickly called the  doctor .   In the meantime Sadie still  asleep began  to let…

Writer: Writer: New Excerpt

Writer: Writer: New Excerpt: Writer: New Excerpt : The blood was all over the rug, it was a rainy day that May evening. I could still here the loud shots as I laye...

Writer: New Excerpt

Writer: New Excerpt: The blood was all over the rug, it was a rainy day that May evening. I could still here the loud shots as I layed on the ground, kno...

New Excerpt

The blood was all over the rug, it was a rainy day that May evening.  I could still here the loud  shots as I layed on the ground, knocked unconscious.   As I tried to open up my eyes, I tried to  recall.  what had led me to this moment.  Immediately, I felt my thoughts getting away with me. 
“ My Keyla, Please baby girl, be okay” !     Suddenly, I could not breath, “ Oh I thought to myself it finally has happened!   As I opened my eyes    I began to  to not only see but hear  an officer’s voice calling me.  At first all I heard was really muffled, for a second there I thought I was going deaf.  Then my thoughts all began to drift away.  “ Sadie, Please, calm down! Please put the gun down”!    I thought to myself what was going on, am I dreaming, is this for real, what happened?   I kept  trying to scream, but I felt so weak.   “ Help me! Help me! please “ Help me”!  “ Sadie, please, please, stop this, “ I am begging you”! Mam!, Mam!,  called a man’s voice.  “ Can you hear me, mam, the man, called …

Writer: New Excerpt: Revised

Writer: New Excerpt: Revised: Prologue: “ Sadie why are you acting up? Why are you trembling?”, please let me help you”! The room got pitched dark and...
Sadie Carlyle awoke in a state of despair when she finally opened her eyes, she  noticed that  she was lying in what appeared to be a large hospital bed.   Then,   immediately, Sadie  began  screaming very loudly.  She was so out of control that a strong sedative was required to calm her  down.   Her long red hair looked so dry, as the sedative took immediate effect.  It was not too  long before her greenish eyes began to close again, her skin looked so pale as the nurse applied  a soft pillow under her neck.   This had been an intense few days for Sadie.   Her emotions    were running so high that you could see the puffiness in her swollen eyes from all the non-stop  crying.   It was so hard to believe that Sadie was once a very attractive green eyed  red head that captivated a room with her profound beauty.  After a few minutes the nurse noticed  that Sadie was bleeding from her nose.   As this was going on, the nurse quickly called the  doctor .   In the meantime Sadie still  asleep began  t…

Writer: New Excerpt: Revised

Writer: New Excerpt: Revised: Prologue: “ Sadie why are you acting up? Why are you trembling?”, please let me help you”! The room got pitched dark an...

New Excerpt: Revised

Prologue: 
“ Sadie why are you acting up?  Why are you trembling?”, please let  me help you”!  The room got pitched dark and Sadie felt the room begin to spin rapidly.   “ Stay away from me Dante!,  or I swear I will kill you”.   “ You have  hurt me for the very last time!”  As she said this Dante tried to walk quietly towards her.    “ Please baby- Why don’t you let me call the doctor so he can help you? After a brief silence- Sadie grabs a gun. “ Sadie  please put the gun down”!, he said urgently.   “Please baby,  don’t do this” !   “ Give me the gun, okay, I promise you darlin, we can  get through this!”, he said in a stern tone.  “ No! Dante, don’t try to make me forget all you have done to me” !      As Sadie cried out, her thoughts began to run away with her.     As she looked down,  at the 9 millimeter gun she had in her hand, her nose began to bleed.   Then suddenly  her vision got very blurry.   She could hear her daughter’s cry and all of a sudden the room  begins to move  in different dire…

sylstein's corner: excerpt to my novel..

sylstein's corner: excerpt to my novel..: Sadie seemed confused and disoriented- she had no idea where she was and what was happening to her.. " Dante are you here, she cried, Dant...

Writer: Prologue

Writer: Prologue: Prologue: “ Sadie why are you acting up? why are you trembling, please let me help you. The room got pitched dark and S...

Writer: “ I am trapped in this dark hole,  “ I am trying t...

Writer “ I am trapped in this dark hole, “ I am trying t...: “ I am trapped in this dark hole, “ I am trying to get out, but he does not allow me, "he is my enemy and I wish he was gone! “ Ok...
“ I am trapped in this dark hole,  “ I am trying to get out, but he does not allow me”, he is my enemy and I wish he was gone.  “ Okay Sadie now why did you write this on your journal today and whom is this about. “ This is about my husband Dante.   “ What do you mean Dante, and that he is your enemy?  said a puzzled Dr. Howard. “ Dante is the one who has been beating me all this time, as Sadie fought back tears her nose began to bleed. “  Why would Dante hurt you Sadie?, as dr. Howard waited for her to respond she noticed Sadie’s nose bleeding a bit stronger.  “  Sadie do you want me to call Dr. Brewster to schedule an appointment for your nose bleeds.   “ oh no Dr. Howard that will not be necessary.....   I have had nose bleeds since I was a child. Oh I was not aware of that..  She said but then continued “ so these nose bleeds are normal to you. “ Yes Doctor , and right now your concern should be on Dante my husband who is out to  kill me, because he wants custody of our daughter Keyla. “ Ke…