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Prologue Revised


“ I am trapped in this dark hole,  “ I am trying to get out, but he does not allow me”, he is my 
enemy and I wish he was gone. 
“ Okay Sadie now why did you write this on your journal today and whom is this about.
“ This is about my husband Dante and I wrote this on my journal because I needed to 
finally tell my side of everything that has happened”. 
 Oh!  okay, so What do you mean Dante, and that he is your enemy?  said a puzzled Dr. 
Thompson. 
“ Dante is the one who has been beating me all this time”,  Sadie fought back tears, as she said 
this and then suddenly  her nose began to bleed.
“  Why would Dante hurt you Sadie?, stated Dr. Ray Thompson.  As he waited for her to respond 
he then  noticed Sadie’s nose bleeding a bit stronger.
 “  Sadie do you want me to call Dr. Brewster to schedule an appointment for your nose bleeds.  
“ oh no!  Dr. Thompson she said,  “ that will not be necessary”.  Then she added   “  I have had 
nose bleeds since I was a child”. 
Oh I was not aware of that..  He stated and then asked  “ So these nose bleeds are normal to 
you”?  
“ Yes,  Doctor ,  she answered in a more angry tone.    Listen, Dr. Thompson, I appreciate your 
concern however, right now your concern should be on Dante my husband who is out to  kill 
me”,   because he wants custody of  Keyla”!
“ Keyla, you mean your infant daughter”?  
“ Yes,  doctor my lovely baby girl.
( Dr.Thompson’s  heart began  to race.)   “ Sadie do you recall what happened last night”?
“ Yes,  doctor my husband took our daughter and now is trying to kill me so that he can keep her”!    Sadie again breaks down in tears.  
“  Sadie, listen to me now,  you need to stop this and you need to do it now”!!!!

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