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Writer: Chapter 3 Excerpt:: Sadie lay motionless in the hospital bed as doctors ran tests on her.   Her body was  covered in bruises and all the necessary precaut...

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  1. Micheal RiversApril 6, 2012 at 8:49 PM

    Okay you got me hooked I am ready for the rest of the story....very good

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  2. Syl SteinApril 7, 2012 at 2:48 PM

    Dear Micheal,

    thanks so so much, this means so much. I am going to be placing more of my story here thanks again.

    Sylvia

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